Wednesday, 19 February 2014

Getting back to Fiction cont'd. again. (DA)

The next bit in the excerpt. I hope you enjoy it.

Corilian cont'd. again.


“If I’m causing you grief and making you worry, then maybe we shouldn’t be on the same boat.”

Seth waived his arms about frantically trying to pull Blayze back into the original conversation. “That’s not what I said at all! I don’t want you to transfer ships; I want you to be more careful.” Still sitting on the curb of the road Blayze looked up to Seth skeptically. He crouched in front of her and asked, “Please, just try.”

“Fine. I’ll try.” She agreed, dusting off her pants and standing on the side of the street. Seth wrapped his arms around her, hugging her tight.

He whispered, “We’ve done everything together since we were kids, I don’t know what I’d do without you.” Blayze tried to relax; they’d hugged a million times before. They were old friends, but this hug was different. She could feel his heart beating quickly and blushed when she noticed her own mirroring his. She inhaled his scent; wind, old books and olive oil. Her heart fluttered and she hoped he didn’t notice. She hugged him back and felt his heartbeat quicken. She looked down at him, a smile starting in the corners of her mouth as the whistler on the Mary-Ellen Windchester sounded. The pair broke apart at the signal and looked back to the ship.

”Damn old man sure can unload a ship quickly.”

Seth laughed. “Not to mention and load the new cargo. But we’d better get back quickly. Captain Montag’ll leave without us.”

Blayze tossed her jet black curls out of her face as she laughed and bent at the knees. She counted aloud to three before racing down the street out of sight. Knowing that her reaction would be to want to race back to the ship, Seth had started running on the count of one. Blayze was faster than him, and he needed every advantage he could get to beat her. They split up when the road forked, losing sight of each other.

At the ship Blayze came to a skidding halt. Seth was nowhere in sight. Could he have beaten me here? She wondered searching the docks. A couple seconds later she heard his laboured breaths as he sprinted around a building in view of the ship. His shoulders drooped when he noticed his competitor already standing beside their ship. Seth hung his head in defeat. He heard Blayze laugh victoriously and looked up to watch her step deliberately onto the gangplank and walk nonchalantly on to the ship.

A thin line of smoke rose from a pipe in a corner of the cargo hold; Finn had been waiting for them. “So, relieve any tension while you were out?” He laughed at his own joke, but cowered in his chair holding his temples when Seth stepped on board. “You were supposed to relieve the tension. Not increase it! I need some calmer air.” He yelled “We’ve got ‘em Captain,” as he reached the deck.

“What’s his problem?”

Seth pulled her in close, half teasing. “I always tell you just to ignore Finn. He gets crazy when emotions run hot.” His hand lingered around her waist for a moment before he followed Finn up to the main deck.

“I believe he was referring to sexual tension again.” Izek appeared at Blayze left shoulder. She spun in surprise, fists up, ready to strike him. Realizing her mistake, she stood her ground and did not drop her arms. “Put those down. Save your strength for the fight.”

“What fight?” Her head looked upward trying to listen for the signs of a struggle.

“We’re headed to Trav’oc with a shipment of ores. We need to be ready to defend this ship.” Izek, who often tired of Blayze’s boundless energy, found the smile that spread across her face contagious and started smiling too. “You really like this job, don’t you?”


Blayze nodded as she walked over to her locker and pulling out her bow, quiver of arrows and twin scimitars. She attached the two swords to the belt at her waist and put the quiver and bow over her shoulders. As she walked past Izek to the ladder she said, “I love my job.”

That's it for now! Thoughts? Constructive criticism encouraged. 

-Brandolyn

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